SIKKIM
As I watch the trickles of tears flowing
From the corners of these mountains’ eyes
On my drive up the steep road to Nathula pass
I’m drawn nearer to streams from your eyes
Whose memory melts me again and again
Into murmurs of wind
That sweeps across miles of mute desire
Along stretches of vast green land
Swaying inside mind;
Your silence killed me then
Now it heals
With a cold moist breeze
Sprinkling vapours on dreaming faces
That float like clouds on hills’ lovely tresses;
Now I make this journey up the hard joints
Of your body across time
To your icy head skirting my country
Where love is under high alert
Life is a tough knot
And every breath ,difficult
Turning me into a drop in the trickle
Down your body Sikkim
Where I would love to perish
As I vanish into this afternoon rainbow in your eye.
Comp. n copyright :saroj k. padhi
18/08/14
'SIKKIM' Took me into a world of complete bliss...*
ReplyDeleteAstonished to know that a simple experience can take the shape of such an admirable poem....
This poem will be a treat to numerous tourists who will visit sikkim again n again to experience your perception about this place voraciously....
# hats off...
thnx a lot Manaswini for ur BEAUTIFUL N SUPERB OBSERVATIONS.....ur comments r perceptive,awe-inspiring n perhaps implicated in a kind of prophetic outpour...i don't know why....but it pleaseth me a lot....thnx again...
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DeleteSir,this poem provides soothing effect and calm feeling to mind.Your skillful writing is just awesome.The poem is very wonderful and will surely touch millions of hearts.Hope you will gift us with such beautiful poems in future...
Deletethnx sagarika for such lovely comments n wishes...i ll surely try to....:)
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